Hello readers
Today in my writing class I finished a piece of writing to persuade people. We had to pick if cats should be kept inside or outside but of course I picked inside. Here is my writing!
I strongly believe that cats should not be allowed to go outside. Here are my 3 reasons why they should NOT be allowed to go outside. But if you think cats should be allowed to go outside then I shall change your mind.
My first reason why cats should not be allowed to go outside is that they can run away and if your cat ran away you might never find it. But if you keep your cat inside it will not run away. So if you decide to let your cat outside just keep reading.
My second reason is they kill native animals like birds and lizards. If you want to let your cat outside it could kill birds and lizards you can keep it inside so it does not kill all our native animals. But it is easier to keep your cat inside because you won’t have to go back and forward to get your cat. If that still didn’t take your hat off my last reason should.
My last reason is they could get kidnapped. If your cat gets kidnapped imagine how sad you will be. If you don’t let your cat outside it will be so safe. But if you let your cat outside they could run away, kill all the native animals and get kidnapped.
Therefore I think cats should be kept inside so they don’t want any of the above to happen to your cat should keep it inside. If you still think you should let your cat outside you did not listen so read again.
Kia Ora Ella, my name is Helen and I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School. I really liken your blog post about "Why cats should be kept inside". I also like the way that you put a little description. When I read your post I learned that cats shout not be outside by themselves because everything you said in your writing could happen. To improve you could make your description using another font because I thought the description was part of the writing. Did you enjoy writing this? Would do like to do it again?
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Kia Ora, Ella my name is Waniya I'm from Room 23 at Owairaka District School .I really like you blog post about you writing. my favourite part all what your favourite? Next time you should check out my blog.
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